The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The given diagram illustrates the production process of coffee and the preparation to display it in supermarket and shops. According to the process, there are 11 stages required beginning with collecting the beans of the coffee plants and finishing with the product is packed into jars.
In initial stage, beans are picked by farmers and placed in baskets. Afterward, they are dried under the sunlight naturally. Then, all the high quality beans are collected and roasted in a high power roaster. In the subsequent step, the beans are immediately cooled before put in the grinder. After that, it is mixed with water which is in a high temperature. This mixture is frozen after going through filtering stage. In the following step, the grinder is used once again to grind the frozen liquid. In next, it is dried in a vacuum before produce a finishing product. In the end of the process, coffee is packaged into jars and put on shelves in supermarkets or shops for sales.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uum before produce a finishing product. In the end of the process, coffee is packa...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ves in supermarkets or shops for sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91139240506 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60928420151 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5222410044 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5454545455 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 5.23603664747 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1484734003 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513727540364 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947693327801 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128446528659 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581807321637 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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