The given flow chart illustrates the process of transforming coffee beans from raw materials to coffee powders ready to sell packaged in supermarkets and shops.
Firstly, coffee beans are harvested directly by hands of farmers in the nature environment before being dried in wide fields under the sunlight. After that humans put dried beans into the oven and heat at a certain temperature until coffee beans become perfectly roasted. Next phase is freezing roasted beans speedily then grinding them carefully to create a fine powder. During the next step, after soaking powders into the high temperature water, the coffee mixture is squeezed to remove the excessive water. In the next phase, the coffee mixture once again being frozen and ground into powders. After that, coffee powders are put into a vacuum to perform the dehydration process. Finally, all powders are moved to the packaging step as being poured into the containers then labeled to be the final product at supermarkets and shops.
Overall, the process consists of multiple steps which help coffee beans to reveal their truest flavor compare to raw materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onment before being dried in wide fields under the sunlight. After that humans pu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23626373626 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45287058062 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6643517514 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116543181132 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537995392005 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413196995008 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937363694573 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493633928003 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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