The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Given is the diagram delineating the process of generating electricity by hydroelectricity power station. It is perceptible that this is the linear process with multiple steps, which commences with water from river pass through a dam, and ends at electricity is produced and goes to the national grid with a line.
The process is initiated when water from the high-level reservoir passes over a dam through the intake, which is opened during day and closed at night. In the subsequent step, water is flowed before it is poured directly into a power station with the reversible turbines inside. Reversible turbines are worked differently in the morning or evening, which is the most important work of the whole process. Process continues with the turbines are swung by the flow and then a generator is started, thereafter electricity is manufactured and goes out through power lines to the national grid. Ultimately, the amount of water flow through the turbines remains in a low-level reservoir till the night time to let the turbines pass these water back through the way they come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Process continues with the turbines are swung by the flow and then a generator i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06145251397 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78919251649 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8237545011 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929800490427 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689738773365 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103045046101 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947084408996 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459878990506 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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