The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram illustrates the electrical production was created by geothermal power.

Overall, it can be seen that the geothermal power plant had four steps in total, which begins at the cold water pumps down the ground and endings when electricity is produced by a generator.

At the first step of this process, the cold water was run off the surface into an injection well, where approximately 4.5km underground. Next, the water has flowed to a geothermal zone, which is made by hot rocks and after that, the cold water was converted into hot water via the production well and pumped up to a condenser.

At the fourth stage, the stream from the condenser has operated a turbine, which leads to the operation of a generator, then electricity was produced and moved to an electric pole for distributable purpose.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94202898551 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7937578574 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8589140735 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.4 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823179750222 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548549899808 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046587791605 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662407306539 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443196098935 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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