the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The picture illustrates a detailed description of how to generate instant noodles.
In general, the procedure for producing instant noodles goes through 8 steps, commencing with flour being poured into storage silos and culminating with labels being packed for labeling with sealing.
The process commences when the flour is poured into storage silos so that the flour can create a mixer combined with water and oil upon rollers before the next phase. This mixer is delivered on dough sheets and through the Dough strips. When this particular stage in the process has been completed, the noodle discs are generated with the noodle swirl. The noodle discs have been cooked and dried with oil before being put into the cups.
Following this, the noodle discs have been cooked and dried with oil before being put into the cups. At the same time, the noodles are added more ingredients into the cups with vegetables and spices in order to bring flavor to consumers. The final step is that these cups are packed with labeling and sealing in the cups with the aim of advertisement for labels for consumption.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95698924731 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33788763207 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.504534116 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10099809324 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547132062906 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499786361803 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838178522948 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423694533209 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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