The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram illustrates the process of making instant noodles.
As can be seen from the diagram, there are 8 stages to produce instant noodles, beginning with the collection of flour and ending at the labeling and Sealing stage.
At the beginning of the noodle-making process, flour is collected and is sent to storage Silos by a truck. At this point, it IS mixed with water and oil and then the mixture is rolled into dough sheets by a roller. The dough sheets then are cut into dough stripS before being formed round noodle discs.
At the following stage, the noodle discs are then cooked in oil and dried. At the seventh Stage, the dried noodle discs are put into cups, where vegetables and spices are added. The cups containing noodles, vegetables and spices are labelled and Sealed at the end of the process, ready to be purchased and consumed by people.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72847682119 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37411445707 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3706560792 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119780986215 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064580289912 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546157829278 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974329952658 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527415479569 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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