The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the power of water is used to generate electricity.

The provided diagram depicts the way by which electricity is harnessed from water power. As illustrated, four stages are required to produce hydroelectric energy.
In the beginning of the process, the water flow in the reservoir is passed through an intake structure into the dam and raised by it to create falling water. In the next stage, falling water is regulated and flowed down through sluice gate to a turbine. The pressure the water flow creates, trigger the turbine to spin and thereby the kinetic energy of falling water is converted to mechanical energy. Then, as a result of the turbine spinning, the generator is also activated as it is connected to the turbine which lead to turning of the mechanical energy into electrical power and the remaining water is released. Finally, as the newly produced current's voltage is high, it is carried out to a substation transformer in order to reduce its voltage to 220 to 240 volts and after that it is supplied to its various destination via transmission lines.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91279069767 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75693603885 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2555944585 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165664129398 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774103810927 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625929063875 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135513189766 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00508531523825 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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