The global human in the new millennium is the problem of obtaining a drinkable water.
The diagram shows us the various stages of sea water purification.
First of all, water from sea is given in the reservoir to the Pre-treatment, hereby heavy and big particles of waste is remained on the filters. After that, water forced through the membrane at high pressure, herewith water molecules under pressure pass through the membrane and the salts and impurities is remained on the membrane surfaces. On this stage seawater concentrate is produces. After both phases: Pre-treatment and purifying under pressure seawater concentrate and waste products from filter backwash are returned to the sea. Following that water is treated with lime, chlorine and fluoride. Then water is sent for storage. Finally, water enters to integrated water supply system.
Thus, the obtaining of drinkable water is multiplestage process, which consist from Pre-treatment, purifying under pressure, post-treatment and water precipitation in the storage reservoir and in the end we get drinkable sweet water.
- The charts show information about the number of UK university students and government spending and types of student's family economic background in 1991. 89
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 86
- The line graph shows changing patterns of business communication in New Stratford from 1980 to 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'drinkable water'.
Suggestion: drinkable water
... millennium is the problem of obtaining a drinkable water. The diagram shows us the various stag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50299401198 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9805445613 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.3238088296 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152188319207 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668353307333 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445143137335 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104019465732 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523193946751 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.