The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

The diagram illustrates information about the stages of how electricity supplied to domestic area from solar panels.
It can clearly be seen that there are five distinct steps for electricity manufacturing. At the first step, energy from sunlight is collected by solar panels and at the last stage, if solar panels do not contribute enough electricity for your house, power from utility grid will flow into the house.
At the beginning of the process, solar panels on the rooftop of the houses take energy from sunlight and convert power into DC current. Secondly, an inverter will take the responsibility to turn DC current into AC current which allows controlling electricity provider. At the following step, electricity is distributed to houses through an electrical panel.
At the fourth step shown in the picture, a utility meter has been installed for the purpose of sending any extra electrical power to the grid. At the final stage, when power from solar panels is not enough to contribute to the house, electrical power from grid will be used.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...any extra electrical power to the grid. At the final stage, when power from solar ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08045977011 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73524579518 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8773953904 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226434099229 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119039188709 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589187162254 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160676229815 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492294663622 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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