The diagram below shows the life cycle of a monarch butterfly and its anatomy

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a monarch butterfly and its anatomy

The first diagram illustrates the natural process in which a monarch butterfly grows, while the second one shows its body structure.

As can be inferred from the picture, there are four distinct stages in the life cycle of a monarch butterfly from egg to adult insect. In terms of its anatomy, an adult butterfly has eight main body parts.

The life cycle of a monarch butterfly starts when the female lays eggs, then an egg hatches after four or five days and emerges into larva after 4 or 5 days. After that, it continues in that form for more than 14 days before chrysalis is informed. In the following step, it takes about 12 to 16 days for the pupa to develop from larva and to mature into an adult. At the end of the stage, an adult monarch butterfly lays eggs on milkweed in a period of time from a day to a month, then the life cycle starts again.

The next picture describes the body parts of this species in detail. The head consists of compound eyes, antennae and proboscis, whereas below parts are an abdomen and a spiracle. The highlight of its body are stunning black and yellow wings, and it has three legs in total.

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Average: 7 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 444, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ch butterfly lays eggs on milkweed in a period of time from a day to a month, then the life cy...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow parts are an abdomen and a spiracle. The highlight of its body are stunning blac...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5023923445 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23953091727 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8645274532 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296287768524 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102947146864 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904495784031 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175060407965 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790231749282 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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