The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to
adult fish.
A glance at the given picture provides an illustration of the life cycle,which is belonged to a salmon.
Overall it is clear from the given data is that there are 6 main phases starting with putting eggs and ending with coming of adult fish. From the given process all steps are linked to each other respectively.
Looking at the information in more detail, the supplied process commences with incubation of the salmon. Then, tge young fishes are emerge from the small eggs. Once, the fishes have been reared freshwater, tge process comes to tge next stage in which unripen salmons are continued rearing estuary territory. Then the process is accompanied by sttlementing to rearing areas. Afterwards,the fishes underwent the period of growth and maturation. Once,the final stage has been completed, salmons are colonized to spawning areas,which are they can reproduce and lay their eggs. And the life cycle begins anew.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ttlementing to rearing areas. Afterwards,the fishes underwent the period of growth...
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... to rearing areas. Afterwards,the fishes underwent the period of growth and matu...
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...as. Afterwards,the fishes underwent the period of growth and maturation. Once,t...
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... period of growth and maturation. Once,the final stage has been completed, salmons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17333333333 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72254782633 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6481923156 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237801113483 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885493057527 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587052390068 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143971410311 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302289751936 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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