The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to
adult fish.
The given diagram details the journey of the salmon's life from the period of birth until maturation, which further repeats as a cycle.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the entire process consists of eight stages that start with spawning and passes through incubation, emergence, rearing, and adulthood before circling back into the spawning areas.
According to the given illustration, the whole journey begins from the spawning, which leads to the incubation period followed by the laying of eggs. After that, baby fishes emerges out of the eggs to undergo rearing into the freshwater prior to entering the next step.
Moving on, then the fishes switch themselves fro the freshwater rearing to the estuary rearing. From here, they further migrate into the rearing areas, where they grow into mature fishes. Finally, in the end, the adult salmon returns back in the search of the spawning areas to be ready to continue the production cycle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
...iven diagram details the journey of the salmons life from the period of birth until mat...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...g on, then the fishes switch themselves fro the freshwater rearing to the estuary r...
^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returns'.
Suggestion: returns
.... Finally, in the end, the adult salmon returns back in the search of the spawning areas to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dy to continue the production cycle.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42397626881 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8701474868 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188825424955 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779961642246 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540497142475 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108947109436 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593772028668 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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