The diagram below shows the light penetration under the ocean.
The given layout depicts the information about penetration of light into the four different zones of ocean at different temperature (Celsius) at the depth of 6000 metre from the surface of ocean. It is a clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen, that light is coming from the sky and falling on the surface of ocean in zig zag trend. Then it penetrate into the ocean. The depth 200 metre from the surface of ocean has been known as Sunlight zone (temperature 5°C) because this region lies just below the surface of ocean. Then light has penetrated the zone of 3°C(temperature) called: twilight zone under the depth of 1000 metre. The pattern of light in which it penetrated the different zones is undetermined.
Following this, the region below 1000 metre from the ocean's surface is known as semi dark zone because it has been at the depth of 4000 metre which has the temperature of only 1°C. Moving ahead, the dark zone appears where light cannot penetrate (6000 metre) from surface of ocean.
Overall, it is evident that as the depth of ocean increases the temperature is reducing and regions has become more and more dark.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'penetrates'?
Suggestion: penetrates
...face of ocean in zig zag trend. Then it penetrate into the ocean. The depth 200 metre fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78680203046 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53823349734 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451776649746 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7184384618 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274292717264 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133657423252 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669514171549 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171293015833 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090789621477 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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