The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

The given process details the step by step procedure, stating how electricity can be produced at home in the future using man-made criteria.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the entire process is comprised of seven main steps. Starting with Composed fermentation, followed by compression of gas, and conversion into mechanical and electrical energy before storing it in the home battery for later use.

According to the given illustration, to begin with, the compost in the form of leaves, and food scraps is mixed with water to fill 75% of the steel tank so as to initiate the fermentation process. From here, the produced methane gas is moved into a storage tank via pipes prior to entering into a compressor.

In the next stages, the conversion of the compressed gas takes place in a combustion engine. After that, the emerged mechanical energy is passed on into the generator to be ready to follow another transformation. In the later step, the generated electrical energy is stored in a battery for home-usage.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...eadily apparent that the entire process is comprised of seven main steps. Starting with Compose...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ith water to fill 75% of the steel tank so as to initiate the fermentation process. From...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, as to, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90555183579 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6070130031 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931186031293 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041558201827 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451172439726 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594759866913 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035677646741 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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