The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams illustrate the process of cements and concrete in order to build a building.
Overall, limestone and clay are the main foundations for the cements by passing through four stages before being bagged ready for use as cement which then accounts for 15% of four materials used to produce concrete.
Looking in details, the cement production can be divided into four processes by starting of crushing limestone and clay into a powdery form. This mixture then passed onto the mixer to rotating heating cylinder and it will be placed onto the grinder after getting the heats. Then the final products become a cement and ready to be bagged.
For the concrete production, which require the mixture of four materials poured into concrete mixer, which are the combination of 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravels.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'then']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290322580645 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.167741935484 0.116061578633 145% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0387096774194 0.0759168565197 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0193548387097 0.0366838410393 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00645161290323 0.0131127313244 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141935483871 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0838709677419 0.0379272487307 221% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.43884452413 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258064516129 0.0210936926555 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103225806452 0.0948980150116 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0129032258065 0.00437022459523 295% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193548387097 0.00967000014798 200% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 826.0 1161.00487805 71% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.9 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98550724638 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398550724638 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304347826087 0.247514529752 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18115942029 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0869565217391 0.112407865282 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43884452413 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 51.3283769481 49.3433353143 104% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0094962315 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0870716414 42.9750493124 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 135.714022679 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.0094962315 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 53.4347826087 47.7609492067 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.66666666667 2.94281807926 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463284644153 0.418131533498 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139263295318 0.181151798455 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0491376307344 0.0850326197045 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.808809841475 0.706616315825 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194458111504 0.157042692854 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267115905291 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683583104514 0.108899403657 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255476919487 0.367819155151 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0356644509954 0.0812612215331 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318622982763 0.316326947829 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377995548698 0.0921553760075 41% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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