The diagram below shows the working of a refrigerator

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the working of a refrigerator.

The diagram illustrates about how a refrigerator operates. The information is appropriately arranged into a sequence.

Initially, the heat is extracted from the food within a refrigerator facilitated by an evaporator. The heat turns into warm low pressure gas and moves towards a machine which make the gas fit into a smaller space known as compressor and turns it into high hot pressure gas. This high hot pressure gas flows toward condenser which removes the heat from gas by exhausting it into atmosphere and makes the high pressure gas flow into it which eventually becomes cool high pressure liquid.

The capillary tube receives the cool high pressure liquid from condenser and makes it flow towards evaporator where the process restarts again.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (7 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26446280992 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82550368508 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4707655151 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0150977351878 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169384449652 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378755143753 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0245249153686 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346834679304 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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