The diagram give information about the manufacturer of frozen fish pies
The diagrammatic representation elucidates how fish pies are produced in factories with four main ingredients: salmon, potatoes, peas and sauce.
Overall, it can be manifested
First of all the potatoes are delivered a month in advance and once they have reached the factory they are cleaned with a Jets spray to remove any impurities. on a cover Belt, the potatoes are passed ahead where they are peeled and chopped in adequate size following this, potatoes slices are boiled in a container before being allowed to cool of in wat and finally stored for their process.
Simultaneously, within twelve hours of being delivered to the factory the piece of fresh fish is cooked in steam in the oven after adding lemon juice and salt to it then skin and bones are removed before visual inspection takes place. after this, peas and sauce which have been prepared in advance are added, and a layer of potatoes slices is mixed to top it off the pice are then wrapt and freezes and lastly, they are either dispute store for the delivery.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... a Jets spray to remove any impurities. on a cover Belt, the potatoes are passed a...
^^
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...d before visual inspection takes place. after this, peas and sauce which have been pr...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, lastly, then, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79775280899 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51968640777 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2613484848 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.8 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0425666420451 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269139396537 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384810710074 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307614996531 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404546291114 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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