The diagram illustrates the different stages in the life of a honey bee.
The given diagram details the various stages in the life cycle of a honeybee.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the entire cycle consists of six phases, starting with the laying of eggs by the female bee, undergoing different growing stages before getting fully matured to be ready to repeat the cycle. The whole cycle is about 34 to 36 days long.
According to the given illustration, to begin with, the adult female starts the process by laying nearly one to two eggs, which usually happens after every three days. After that, it takes almost 9 to 10 days for the eggs to hatch into a newly born bee. From here, the newly hatched bee follows a few developmental stages, which moves successively for 5 days, 7 days, and 9 days.
During the growing phase, the immature insect grows 3 times bigger as compared to the previous stage, after which it emerges into a young adult. Moving on, it takes exactly 4 days for a young adult to transform into a mature female. Further, followed by all these stages, a cycle completes prior to repeating once again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72251308901 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40078475516 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9322662946 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140032698202 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579447100852 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790177354289 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10893913759 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881839123357 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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