The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram portraits the whole process of making bricks from digging clay to delivery of finish product bricks. There are six steps involved in this process. Clay is being used as raw material.
The first step starts with digging clay from the ground and after digging the clay is transferred into metallic grid of a roller. Next step is forming the mould which is accomplished by adding sand and water into it. After forming the mould it requires to cut into each piece of brick with the help of a wire cutter. These bricks are soft.
The next stage of building brick is drying. In order to dry, these bricks are kept in a drying oven for a period of 24 to 48 hours. Drying process starts with moderate temperature 200C and ends at 1300C. Cooling is followed by drying which requires 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.
Finally the process bricks are packaged to delivery by a van.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ished by adding sand and water into it. After forming the mould it requires to cut in...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cutting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cutting
...it. After forming the mould it requires to cut into each piece of brick with the help ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. Finally the process bricks are packaged to deli...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cks are packaged to delivery by a van.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58385093168 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24606098285 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1406977371 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140154977163 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584996126337 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462976019268 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956772509034 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449792590936 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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