The diagram shows how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the process of chocolate production.
In general, there are a total of 10 steps including three main stages harvesting, drying cacao sheets, and finally the chocolate products.
Starting off the production process, cacao trees are planted in either South America, Africa, or Indonesia, which have humid tropical climates. Secondly, when the pods matured and turned ripe and red color, they are harvested, cut with a knife, and collected the white cocoa beans inside. After that, the workers wrap white beans with banana leaves to ferment before spreading them in the sun to dry. The cocoa beans are put in large bags and properly weighed before being delivered by train or truck to the manufacturing place.
After being transported to the factory, beans are roasted at 35 degrees Celsius. The next step is to put them into a machine where outer shells are separated and dumped while beans are crushed. Finally, the inner part of beans is squeezed by press equipment, turing it into liquid chocolate to produce various chocolate products

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...te production. In general, there are a total of 10 steps including three main stages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49079939631 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1283126924 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971734182533 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434095107288 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594545466844 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823141106202 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624966907068 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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