Essay topics
The diagram illustrates the procedure used to live of a bee. Overall, it is clear that there are four stages, beginning with laying eggs and ending with hatching eggs. The process has main phases, namely maturity and eggs hatch.
The first stage of the process is laying eggs every three days. At the next stage, the eggs are hatched after nine to ten days, depending on the readiness of the egg. Then the eggs are waited for five days, the baby bee is born. Until seven days to nine days, when nymph moults three times during its growth. Subsequently, a young adult is emerged, then up to four days for it to become mature enough to be grown into a grown-up bee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 547.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48360655738 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11159059354 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7667703948 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.375 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714905220048 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403106842963 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665559569724 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628459144919 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197031563612 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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