The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
The pictures illustrate many alterations in Felixstone in the UK from 1967 to 2001
Overall, several shifts took place throughout a 34-year period, largely were for tourism with the addition of accommodation and beaches along with the removal of previous infrastructure
It can be seen that in 1967, there were shops on either side of the high street. There was also some farmland to the east of the high street and a golf course on its west. The town is bordered by sea in the south and there were dunes in its southwest. There was a hotel near the dunes and next to the hotel was a cafe. There was a pier to access the sea and a fish market above it.
The golf course was still there in 2001. While shops to the west of the high street remained there, the shops to the east of it were replaced by apartments. The farmland gave way to a swimming pool, a hotel and tennis courts. Wind turbines had been erected in the southern part of the town near the dunes. The old hotel near the dunes was renovated and a huge car park added to it. The cafe was still there; however, the marina and fish market were gone. A beach was developed in their place and its eastern most part was converted into a private beach.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38766519824 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26874385174 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519823788546 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.9878243079 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0626074220946 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188744530921 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441177524678 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081275923597 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119741150234 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38766519824 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26874385174 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519823788546 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.9878243079 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0626074220946 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188744530921 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441177524678 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081275923597 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119741150234 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.