The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictures give information about five stages of the silkworm from eggs to moths and the steps in the process of making silk cloth.
We can see that there are four distinct stages for the egg grow to be a mature moth. And the production of silk cloth consists of five steps.
The eggs require ten days to become a silkworm larva which feeds on mulberry leaves. After four to six weeks, the larva can produce silk thread and the larva stays in the thread. The cocoon is then made after three to eight days. Finally, the moth will destroy the cocoon after 16 days to be a moth.
The production of silk cloth begins with selecting cocoons and then people need to boil them in the water in a container. Next, the thread needs to be unwound to be as long as 300 to 900 meters. At the fourth stage, workers twist the thread and dye it. Also, the thread can be dyed after being weaved on a board.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01764705882 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.799288862 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4545454545 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142335487025 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596151328832 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722147682619 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110123345955 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667675091763 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.2329268293 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 61.2550243902 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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