The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagrams depict life cycle of silkworm as well as various stages of silk cloth production.
As can be clearly observed from the life cycle, silkworm life consists of four distinctive cycles. First of all, moths lay eggs, thus these eggs convert into larva after about 10 days. The second cycle is about larva which is fed by leaves of mulberry. Then, it needs around 4 to 6 weeks in which larva weaves silk thread around itself. At the third stage, cocoon is produced during 3-8 days. Finally, after nearly 16 days, moth appears from cocoon and cycle begins again.
Turing to several steps of silk cloth production, firstly, cocoons are selected and heated in boiling water. Then, approximately 300 to 900 meters of silk thread will be obtained as cocoons are unwound. Separate threads are twisted together. After that, these twisted threads can be woven to gain fabrics, while dye is introduced to color fabrics or threads.
It is clear from the diagrams that, during the production of silk cloth, larva is killed by boiling. Meanwhile, the quality of silk cloth mostly depends on the selection of cocoons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, then, third, thus, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76842105263 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24410585319 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 190.0 22.4926829268 845% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 906.0 112.824112599 803% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 190.0 22.9334400587 828% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 93.0 5.23603664747 1776% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22603040307 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22603040307 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187586446164 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108778277019 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 96.0 13.2329268293 725% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -104.45 61.2550243902 -171% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 75.0 10.3012195122 728% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.57 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.47 8.06136585366 204% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 11.4329268293 446% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 78.0 10.9970731707 709% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 11.0658536585 461% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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