The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Essay topics: The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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The first diagram illustrates the process of producing cement, and the second diagram introduces the ingredients required in the manufacturing of concrete.

Overall, there are five steps in cement-making process, starting with the input of raw materials and ending with the packaging finished product. In the concrete production, the materials include four different items that are mixed together.

At the beginning of the cement-producing process, limestone and clay are crushed together to turn them into powder. Then, the powder of two ingredients is carefully mixed by a mixer before going to the rotating heater where it is heated by the fire at the end of the pipe. After that, the resulting mixture is ground into cement and packaged in bags as finished products.

Cement is one of the four materials needed in producing concrete, along with gravel, water and sand. The four ingredients are blended together in a specific proportion. The mixture which consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and 10% water are put in the rotating concrete mixer to produce concrete.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25862068966 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85620620039 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.200879405 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216949341356 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898366812532 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658018937566 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140024389578 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429516264814 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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