The given line graph compares the amount of acid that is produced by eating various foods like honey, cane sugar, and fruit sugar on the ph level.
It is clear from the graph that whatever may be the sweet food we intake within a few minutes it increases the chance of occurs and it continues to have the same effect for some more minutes.
Eating sugar cane can cause a rise in acidity level inside the human boys and also keeps the ph level of our body below 5 where there is a high probability of decaying of tooth. However, this effect is alleviated and our body reaches the ph level 7 after 30 minutes from the time we consumed the cane.
On the other side, the chance of our body remaining in the acid level which is prone to tooth decay after having fruit sugar is almost double that of eating honey. Besides, the level of acid inside the body comes to the normal level just over 10 minutes while it takes around 20 minutes.
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- Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society and other think young people should be free to behave as they will Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth which can cause tooth decay High acid levels are measured by low pH values Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health 78
- In some countries it can be very difficult for people over the age 50 to get good jobs despite their experience What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve this problems 73
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nutes while it takes around 20 minutes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36931818182 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97334216171 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.7061384801 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283663206727 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144424111524 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869952525133 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163666591552 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621508758082 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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