Environmental issues such as climate change have always have been an international problem because governments are not imposing Harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate change has become an alarming issue in past few decades. Governments are often held responsible for this issue as it is believed that they do not impose strict penalties against offenders. I disagree with this notion as governments in recent year have taken considerable measures to combat global climate change.
In recent decades, despite the rising problem of climate change government has taken impressive measures to tackle this issue. For instance, in India, to overcome the problem of global warming, Government have launched initiative to control pollution level. One such notable initiative being the odd-even formula in Delhi which was a markable step towards controlling pollution by limiting the number of vehicles on road and any offenders who broke this rule were find by the local police as a result of which pollution level City decline significantly and apart from this government also banned burning of left over crops in state such as Haryana and Punjab and if people were caught practicing burning crops, strict action was taken against them.
However, there are other factors which contribute to climate change such as emission of gases from factories and emission during generation of electricity which government of country cannot impose punishment for as they are necessary for economic development of country. A lot of coal is burnt and gases are released during the production of electricity and if government bans production of electricity entire country or city may stop functioning or if factories are shut down it may hault the supply of essential. Goods we need in our day to day life. Despite, all of this government has still made efforts they can to limit the intake of gases to protect the environment and stop climate change.
In Conclusion, even though government imposed strict restrictions and punishment to overcome climate change but if people do not obey the rules all the efforts will be worthless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 315.0 196.424390244 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21904761905 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73175663833 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 106.607317073 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.151060451 43.030603864 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.454545455 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238233326117 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964609452269 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528550188356 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155787332079 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613681808217 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 40.7170731707 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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