The following diagram shows how rainwater is reused for domestic purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of recycling rainwater for household use
Overall, it is a multiphase procedure that consists of three main stages: collecting, treatment and finally being used or disposed
The procedure commences with rain falling from clouds to either a dam or a house’s rooftop. Also, right next to a house, there is a cylindrical tank that is used to store the rainwater falling from the rooftop. Afterward, water from the dam flows to the water treatment plant, while the other one in the tank is piped to the wastewater treatment plant.
After undergoing a stage of purification, dam water is treated to become drinkable and wastewater from the domestic tank is turned into recycled one. All of them are collectively sent back to the initial house. On the other hand, when being cleaned, excess treated water is produced, which is eventually discharged to the environment along with the stormwater after being treated
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tment and finally being used or disposed The procedure commences with rain fallin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18709677419 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81460439828 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4666961131 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0552171330218 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246321271392 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030223676551 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516797176912 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527076084568 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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