Goods transported in UK (1974-2002).

Essay topics:

Goods transported in UK (1974-2002).

The line chart gives information about how goods transported in the UK over 28-year period, starting from 1974.

Overall, it can be seen that this period experienced a growth in the quantity of goods in all transportation methods except rail. Besides, road was the most transport used to deliver the goods in the same period.

The figure for Road stood at 70 million tonnes in 1974, which later then increased significantly to 100 million tonnes in 2002. This number was 70 million tonnes as high as that for Pipeline. In contrast, between 1974 from 2002 witnessed a slight grow in the figure for Pipeline, from 5 to 20 million tonnes.

In 1974, Water and Rail has the similar figure for quantity of goods. While this period underwent a moderate rise in water’s figure from 40 to 65 million tonnes, the figure for rail still remained unchanged.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'later than'?
Suggestion: later than
...ood at 70 million tonnes in 1974, which later then increased significantly to 100 million ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... 70 million tonnes in 1974, which later then increased significantly to 100 million ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, still, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89726027397 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60563105446 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7823572614 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270563056641 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117239176969 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928468827675 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165169834928 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100683730694 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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