The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
The line graph illustrates the monthly average temperature while the table shows average hours of sunshine throughout a year in three cities - London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, it is clear that although London and New York become warmer but the temperatures start to decrease near the end of the year, the opposite trend is true for SydneyIn details.
Sydney had the highest temperature at the beginning of the year which was above 25°C. On the other hand, New York experienced the lowest temperature which was below 5°C. At that time, the temperature in London was slightly higher than in New York - around 10°C. In the month of February, the temperature of London and New York continued to rise whereas the temperatures of Sydney fell until the mid-July. In the month of July, New York experienced a hiking temperature and hit a peak at below 30°C while the temperature of London rose to 23°C. After that, New York hit the peak point of below 30°C. London experienced the same trend during this period. In contrast, Sydney experienced an increasing trend for its temperature in which the temperature increased from above 15°C to touch the point of 25°C in December.
Based on the table, New York had the highest annual sunshine which was 2535 while Sydney and London ranked second and third respectively with 2473 and 1180 hours of sunshine.
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- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 73
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 61
- One the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, third, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94759825328 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61163488923 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502183406114 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7905478906 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237890358954 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106079884005 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143241306912 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194819240734 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205804278866 0.0819641961636 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.