The line graph illustrates how much money were spent on books in four countries (Germany, France, Italy, Austria) in the time span between 1995 and 2005.
It is clear from the graph that Germany spent the largest amount of money on books all over the years whereas Austria the smallest one until 2002 when overtook Italy which reveals to be the country with the least expenditure at the end of the period.
Germans spent between around 80,000,000 and 95,000,000 $ on books during the ten years exhibiting a moderate fluctuating trend. A similar trend is also shown by France and Italy which varied less than 15 million USD from the beginning to the the end of the period. In fact, in 1995 French and Italians spent approximately 55 and 50 million respectively and in 2005 France resulted to an expenditure of just above 70,000,000 $, significantly higher than that of Italy which was around ten million lower.
Conversely, Austria shows the most varied trend since after a moderate growth in the 90s, passing from 30 in 1995 to 40 million $ by 1999, saw firstly a steady trend until 2001, then began to steeply increased crossing Italy in 2002 at just below 60 million USD. The growth continued and in 2005 Austria had almost reached the expenditure of France.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...an 15 million USD from the beginning to the the end of the period. In fact, in 1995 Fre...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...an 15 million USD from the beginning to the the end of the period. In fact, in 1995 Fre...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
... to an expenditure of just above 70,000,000 $, significantly higher than that of Ital...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, if, so, then, whereas, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85648148148 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49258193456 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6724872898 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.857142857 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256254798075 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119372797795 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082230311515 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170124453137 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788934752069 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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