The graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.
The figure elucidates the average temperatures every month in several towns between January and December. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the average temperatures in Boston.
To begin with, there was a dramatic palpitation for the amount of average temperatures in Boston from January, which made up at just below a half of 10, to December, which constituted approximately at 5. Following the same pattern as Boston, January to December witnessed a tremendous oscillation in the number of average temperatures in Paris where it stood at well under two-thirds of 15 in January and achieved to well above a quarter of 20 in December.
In contrast, the average temperatures in Melbourne had a different pattern rather than other urban areas. It, initially, upright positioned at just across 25 and it plunged significantly to just over 25 in the next 6 months. Erratically, it uplifted highly, soaring to well beneath three-sixths of 60 by the end of the period shown.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atically, it uplifted highly, soaring to well beneath three-sixths of 60 by the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1265060241 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09292033377 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0057510908 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188400337235 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880113381296 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522821227483 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130605200309 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462761967222 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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