The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different countries

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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different countries

The line graph gives information on the changes in the amount of wheat export over three specific areas, namely Australia, Canada and European communnity from 1985 to 1990.
It is immediately apparent that the wheat exports in both canada and european community increased over the period shown, while the opposite was the figure for the wheat exports from australia. Overall, european community was recorded as the place with the fastest growth in the amount of wheat exports.
In 1985, the figure for Canada was nearly 20 million of wheat exports, compared with 17 million and 15 million for European community and australia. Whereas Both Canada and European community were recorded the decrease to approximately 5 million of wheat in 1986, the figure for australia slightly increased by 2 million. During the period from 1986 to 1988, the amount of wheat exports from canada reached the highest value at 25 million in 1988, while there was a stabability trend in the number for european community.
Til 1990, the figure for european community soared sharply to reach 22 million of wheat, surpassing the amount of wheat exports from Canada which significantly dropped and reached the lowest in 1989 before recovering to 18 million in1990. During 1986 to 1990, there was a downward trend in the figure for australia which had an decline of 5 million of wheat in 1990 compared to its in 1986.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...90. It is immediately apparent that the wheat exports in both canada and europea...
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... figure for australia slightly increased by 2 million. During the period from 198...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... exports from Canada which significantly dropped and reached the lowest in 1989 b...
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Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d in the figure for australia which had an decline of 5 million of wheat in 1990 c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01293103448 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53676518739 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4657373434 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.375 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131036664305 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080443018445 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620942021757 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117305415991 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575356271283 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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