The line graph indicates percentage of elderly in Japan, Sweden and USA over ten decades from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, percentage of senior citizens is estimated to go up by 2040, in all the three countries.Percentage of elderly in Japan i predicted to shift from lowest to highest, while, USA and Sweden are reported to experience slight changes.
In 1940, Japan had only 5% elderly, this percentage reduced till 1990 to nearly 0, it is assumed that it will increase till 2020 to one in ten and then estimated to rise steeply till final year to 45%.
On the other hand, no much difference in percentage of senior citizen is observed in Sweden and USA. USA harbored highest percentage of elderly in 1940 with 10%, while, Sweden had just over 5%. Both countries showed similar rise in percentage till 2000; with exactly 10% in USA and nearly 10% in Sweden. From this point, population of elderly was almost constant in USA for four decades. However, that of Sweden continued to rise and expected to reach 25% by 2040. Although, percentage of elderly is estimated to rise by 2040 it will be least by over a fifth when compared to other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... up by 2040, in all the three countries.Percentage of elderly in Japan i predicted to shif...
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...inal year to 45%. On the other hand, no much difference in percentage of senior...
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...izen is observed in Sweden and USA. USA harbored highest percentage of elderly in 1940 with 10%,...
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...rise and expected to reach 25% by 2040. Although, percentage of elderly is estimated to ...
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...ly is estimated to rise by 2040 it will be least by over a fifth when compared to other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73631840796 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68029487082 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4696267225 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129678942159 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640998698035 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394041537873 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089118194419 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470459562939 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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