The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Drinking habits by age (US)
The bar graph compares the four drinking habits of people living in the America. The study is expressed in percentage and is categorized according to age.
Generally, a large proportion of people across all ages never drinks alcohol while a few of them are heavy drinkers. It is also clear that those who are ex-drinkers and non-drinkers are almost equally divided for ages 65 to 74.
Those who do not drink between ages 16 to 24 and 35 to 44 share the same percentage at 60 % which is 5 % higher than those who are 25 to 34 and 45 to 54 years old. Similar rates are also see with for ex-drinkers at just below 10 % for age groups 16 to 24 and 45 to 54, and 5 % for 25 to 34 and 35 to 44. Ex-drinkers and non-drinkers who are 65 to 74 years old have about 40 %.
Americans who occasionally drink are 30 % for 25 to 34 years old while 25 % is noted for 16 to 24 years old. About 20 % is noted for 35 to 44 and 45 to 54 years old while age groups 55 to 64 and 65 to 75 have about 25 % when combined. Heavy drinkers accounts to a rate of around 5% to 15 % for all ages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...y drinkers. It is also clear that those who are ex-drinkers and non-drinkers are almost...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... at 60 % which is 5 % higher than those who are 25 to 34 and 45 to 54 years old. Simila...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
...to 54 years old. Similar rates are also see with for ex-drinkers at just below 10 %...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... 35 to 44. Ex-drinkers and non-drinkers who are 65 to 74 years old have about 40 %. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01408450704 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42865583417 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2991749063 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120165257965 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606468938617 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410865834611 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978920589712 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430217328289 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.98 11.4140731707 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.