The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.
The graph includes many changes in the number of infected people, who suffered from X disease, in Someland over a period of 35 years from 1960 and 1995.
Overall, it is clear that a fivefold increase was occurred in the number of cases of X disease in the firs half of given period. The number of people infected stood at this level for 5 years, before dropping to zero by 1990.
At the beginning of the period, only 100 people contracted the disease. this figure remained steadily for 5 years before rising by 400 cases and reaching a peak of 500 cases in the mid seventies.
Between 1975 and 1980, the number of people suffering from the disease stood at the highest level, before dropping to zero by 1990. After that any cases was not recorded in this region.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of 500 cases in the mid seventies. Between 1975 and 1980, the number of peo...
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...level, before dropping to zero by 1990. After that any cases was not recorded in this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72661870504 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26738577409 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.062093715 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270760377547 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106069787285 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722139897085 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153778970142 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568034310927 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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