The line graph provides information with respect to the volume of people using a Subway Station located somewhere in London.
Overall, it becomes evident that the ratio of passengers fluctuates during the day. More specifically, the Underground Station is crowded at around 8:00 a.m. and 18:00 p.m., when almost 400 people are taking the subway simultaneously.
Looking at the line bar in more detail, we can clearly see that the trajectory starts at 100 passengers (6:00 a.m.), and then, it gradually rises and, as a result, peaks at 400 people at around 8:00 a.m.. Then, it slowly decreases to 200 passengers approximately at 10 a.m..
During lunchtime and later in the afternoon, the trend fluctuates for a bit, when it suddenly plummets to 100 people at 16:00 p.m.. Subsequently, the number of passengers jumps to almost 400 at 18:00 p.m., and afterward, falls rapidly at nearly 150 at 20:00, and remains plateaued for the rest of the day.
- The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities Derby and Nottingham Between 2000 and 2009 78
- The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel s customer service The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 89
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 73
- Some people believe that visual images such as photos and videos provide enough evidence that a crime was committed Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed Discuss both views and give your opinion 72
- The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
..., peaks at 400 people at around 8:00 a.m.. Then, it slowly decreases to 200 passen...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...o 200 passengers approximately at 10 a.m.. During lunchtime and later in the af...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...enly plummets to 100 people at 16:00 p.m.. Subsequently, the number of passengers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01898734177 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79067994728 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6395252411 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886029597085 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523936868651 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442045650878 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730885453965 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481934542193 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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