The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow
The diagram illustrates the process of making an igloo
Overall, there are five main stages in this process, starting with finding an area covered by hard-packed snow and finishing by covering the entrance hole with snow blocks.
In the first stage of the process, after a hard-packed snow place is found. People use a saw snow to cut large snow blocks, from hard-packed snow, which have the ideal measures are 3, 8 and 15 inches for each dimension and they are used for the foundation of the igloo. Afterwards, the edges of the blocks are made flat with the saw to fit each other before setting in a circle upwards style. Next, using a shovel to dig a hole under the wall to create an entrance, and a slightly oversized block is exactly sculptured and put on the top of the igloo.
Out of the remaining steps, parts of overhangs snow between the layers of blocks of the outside of the igloo are removed by a shovel and the gaps among them are filled by snow while the internal surface of the igloo is smoothed by hand. Any excess snow is shovelled out if remaining. In the final phase, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance and it then covered with snow blocks to complete the igloo.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35159081025 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8821046206 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234708438366 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982778066527 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561780273853 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163999593702 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05192243134 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.