International student enrolment in British universities 2009-2014
The bar chart gives us information on the portion of foreign students who had taken courses in British universities in 2009 and 2014.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that in most the universities the enrollment had increased than the previous period, except Liverpool and Cardiff. In the case of increment, Birmingham and Edinburgh were on the top.
To benign with first 4 universities, in Manchester, in 2009, only 6% of pupils came from other countries, just after 5 years, it went up to 8%, while in Liverpool, in both years had the same value which was 8%. Moreover, in 2014, 12% of the total pupils from abroad enrolled courses in Birmingham which was 4% greater than in 2009. In addition, in Brighton, 12 and 13% of international scholars made their enrollment in 2009 and 2014 respectively and this university had the highest number of foreign students than all others.
Turning to the last 6 Universities, according to the graph all had a similar trend except Cardiff, which’s the percent of enrolled abroad students drifted of from 2 to 1%. Glasgow and Huddersfield both climbed up with 2%, while Edinburgh had 3% in terms of enhancement from 3 to 6%. Finally, Leeds was the second university for foreign student's enrollment, in 5 years it rose from 9 to 10%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, second, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8621617462 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.394259164 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337517097789 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134142799177 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120142326967 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205003371499 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101600270565 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.