Internet users as percentage of population

Essay topics:

Internet users as percentage of population

The line graph compares the USA, Canada and Mexico in terms of their proportion of population that used internet in the period from 1999 to 2009.

Overall, it can be seen that the proportions in all 3 countries followed a similar trend of a general increase. Moreover, the figure for Mexico was the lowest throughout the period.

In 1999, around 5% of the Mexicans used Internet, making Mexico the country with lowest percentage of population being Internet users among the 3 countries. The figure for Canada was slightly higher, at 10%, while that of the USA was 4 times higher, at around 20%, being the highest among these countries’.

From 1999 to 2009, the proportions in the 3 countries increased. From being the country with the second highest percentage, Canada rose to the top in 2002, surpassing the USA. In 2009, around 90% of the population of Canada used Internet, 9 times higher than the percentage in 1999. The figures for the USA and Mexico were 80% and 40%, respectively. Mexico kept being the country with the smallest proportion of population using Internet.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the lowest'.
Suggestion: with the lowest
...sed Internet, making Mexico the country with lowest percentage of population being Internet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96174863388 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73114732232 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502732240437 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7859438228 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23669968493 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109110253729 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152312596095 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145757577196 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910911868643 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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