Vaccination for flu was tried on the women of a large town in the countryside in the month of June during the year 1996 on an experimental basis. Bar chart indicates deaths from flu of the natives from March to August. The pie chart illustrates the percentage of females who are at a maximum risk, out of those who were given vaccination. Lines on the third graph depict the number of death cases filed based on gender for a period of 11 months from February to December.
To begin with, the death of only one female from flu was reported before the experiment was conducted which rose to a maximum of four during two months after June. As compared to this, only two males died during this period from June to August as a result of this epidemic.
Secondly, the pie chart shows that the vaccine was given to only the females who were at a maximum risk from the disease, out of which 28% refrained from taking part in the trial. Out of the women who took part in the experiment, most were senior citizens aged 65 or more at 35%, followed by babies or young children at 24% and least being the hospitalized women at 24% of the total.
It can be observed from the line graph, that the number of female deaths increased to 1000 in March and reached its peak in June with as many as 3500 women dying from the disease. After that, the death rate decreased and levelled to 2500 for the rest of the year. The figures for males show a similar trend, but at a lower value than that of their female counterparts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, third, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39145907473 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28452566398 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4004745901 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141091454459 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621495050911 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840539577706 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090420993347 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455921597273 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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