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The line chart illustrates four categories in terms of the amount of acid rain that emitted in UK over a 17-year period.

Overall, it is clear that the total amount of acid rain emissions in the UK fell considerably from 1990 to 2007. Another noticeable trend is that the most dramatic changes were seen in the Electricity, gas and water supply sector.

In 1990, under 3,5 million tons of acid rain were produced by electricity, gas and water supply, compared to transport/communication and domestic were similar at about 0.7 million tons each. However, the amount of acid rain release by electricity, gas and water supply plummeted over the next 17 years, reaching only 0,5 million tons in 2007. A similar trend can be seen in Domestic and transport/communication, with the figure hitting above nearly 0.3 million ton and around 0.7 million ton respectively at the end.

Similarly, there was a gradually decline in the amount of acid rain emissions by the other countries from over 2 million ton in 1991 to approximately 1.3 million ton by 2007.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctricity, gas and water supply sector. In 1990, under 3,5 million tons of acid ...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...ly at the end. Similarly, there was a gradually decline in the amount of acid rain emissions by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97740112994 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23484689211 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5558965421 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0564251655864 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384007108265 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940621472851 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672012439464 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116395968847 0.0819641961636 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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