The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.
The supplied line graphs in combination delineates the amount of steel produced versus its actual demand in the market and the number of employees in the steel industry in the United Kingdom in 2010. Units for steel are measured in million tonnes.
A glance at the graphs reveals that steel production was more than its demand for the whole year except in December when it was vice versa. In case of workers employed, a noticeable decline in the numbers can be observed.
Now turning to details, the amount of steel manufactured in January was 4000 million tonnes after which it increased dramatically and reached to its peak at 5000 million tonnes before falling again to same amount. This value plateaued till July. During this time period, the demand of steel was fluctuating between 2000 to 3000 million tonnes. A significant downward trend can be seen in the production in last three month of the given year whereas demand reduced to 0 and then exceeding to 2000 million tonnes production in December .
As is presented in the second graph, the number of workers were 5000 in January and were maximum in the following month(around 5600). A rapid fall can be seen in the employees of steel industry till March. With the decrease in production of steel, the workers also reduced in December to 1000 after oscillating for eight months.
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Suggestion: a million
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53676838456 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8836926169 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.454545455 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427967378104 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150969400321 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805305028284 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2641255995 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725839831962 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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