The changes in Stokeford village from 1930 to 2010 are revealed in the maps
Overall, the developers are renovated more houses in this area, and they added new building in primary school and retirement home. However, there were no changed facilities like roads, bridges and the river.
When it came to the northern region, the designers extended the roads to the east and west areas, and the houses were relocated in the side of the roads, having around 20 houses, if compared to the first years, there were just around 7 household, and also they demolished the farmland. Meanwhile, the primary school was extended by them to the east side, adding two buildings, but they removed the walk-side located in the opposite the bridge.
In the southern area, around 40 new households were built in the surrounded of the roads, and they renovated the garden region with adding 2 new building in the both wings, becoming retirement home, while they were cut down from 3 to 2 trees. In addition, they established the new roads which connected with the former area. Albeit the does plenty of renovated, there were no change in facilities like River stocks, Bridge and Post office.
- the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010 summarise the information and make comparison where relevant 67
- Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant 73
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 78
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42783854488 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4940192252 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0365754033993 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190005090955 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046541552137 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621145556843 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107585566335 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.