The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fenton a neighboring town since 1962

Essay topics:

The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fenton, a neighboring town, since 1962.

The given maps compare the urban developments that took place in the town of Fenton and Meadowside village over a period of 58 years from 1962 until now.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that over the period as a whole, both the towns have undergone numerous changes, leading to improved infrastructure, better amenities, and extended accessibility.

According to the given illustration, between 1962 and 1985, both the places had witnessed a noticeable size expansion, with road connectivity between the two, to further join a newly renovated main road running through the Meadow Village. Besides this, a new housing estate and an adjoining leisure complex were also established to the West of the main road. Furthermore, just to the other side of the road, opposite to the housing estate, a new super-store occupied the empty location.

Turning to the current time, both locations have been merged together to enhance travel. In this context, a station has been built in the mid-way to further connect the Fenton town. In addition, a business park and a hotel have been constructed to either end of the station, across the connecting road. Moreover, Meadowside village has been transformed into a suburban area.

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, look, moreover, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23880597015 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8636065666 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1236544865 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187448739931 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738431941468 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790671961541 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122165350247 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945215885169 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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