The presented map illustrates how an Australian art gallery has been renovated from 1950 to present.
Overall, the gallery has been transformed significantly over the period. Specifically, while open space was completely eradicated, that for exhibition and entertaining purpose was expanded.
Turning into detail, in 1950, the entrance led directly to sculptures, which were located at the heart of the gallery. In addition, to the right side, galleries for Australian Art, Middle European Art, and Early European Art, respectively, were arranged. Meanwhile, at the opposite area, there was a bookshop, which was adjacent to a temporary exhibition space, and a café. Behind these locations, a courtyard was the only open space in the entire region.
Regarding to the current arrangement, the entrance, sculpture area, rooms for Early European Art, Middle European Art, Bookshop and temporary exhibition region remained. However, the café has been reduced in size to integrate a toilet. In addition, the courtyard has been divided into three counterparts, including an art school for children, a new Australia Aboriginal Art gallery, and the Australian Art room, the previous position of which has been transformed into an Asian Art room.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only open space in the entire region. Regarding to the current arrangement, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58421052632 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00129704187 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8421643067 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231885840625 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837380719917 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941861089226 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151572709328 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892483469851 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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