The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

Essay topics:

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

Between 1990 and 2005 there were so many changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton in terms of developments.

The city is divided into two parts by the river. On the northeast of the river, airport was built in 2005, while it was surrounded by trees 15 years ago. Other things on the east were almost left. At the seaside on the east they also built factories, and on the west buildings and apartments were constructed instead of individual homes and green areas. On the west of the apartments, trees were chopped down and instead the supermarket took place in 2005.

Lake area followed the same trend, individual homes and trees were replaced with apartments. Furthermore, the area that stands between lake area and the supermarket was filled by trees, and at the same area on the east of the lake there was a home and trees but in 2005, they were knocked down. Also, in 2005 the ferry occurred when there was no sea transportation in 1990.

The overall picture is that there were more green areas 15 years ago, but they cutted the trees down and built new things instead in order to develop the place.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, while, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63184079602 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37469310593 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502487562189 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9912492023 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185318228008 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849788166745 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12776003965 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163776148991 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168795013624 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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