Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Percentage of water used for different purposes

Essay topics:

Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Percentage of water used for different purposes

The pie charts illustrate the portion of water consumed in various purposes in six regions of the globe. It can be seen in the charts that consumption of water in agricultural field are the most in regions except for North America and Europe, where water usages in industrial sectors are the highest.

In Central Asia, agricultural sector uses water the highest, at 88%, followed by Africa and South East Asia, at 84% and 81% respectively. Moreover, South American uses most of the water in agriculture as well. However, the need of water for agricultural purposes in North America and Europe is the second highest component, at 39% and 32%.

In contrast, while industries in North America and Europe use a major portion of water, factories in Africa and Central Asia consume the water the least. South East Asia and South America require more or less the same amount of water in industries.

The usage of water in domestic needs is same in South and Central part of Asia, at 7%. Similarly, in North America and Europe consume the same level of water, while in Africa household water usages has been just below 10%.

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Average: 7.9 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'consumes'.
Suggestion: consumes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, while, except for, in contrast, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84455958549 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49819393003 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492227979275 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1078631018 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245710826301 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124226733837 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445271740409 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165332549519 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436315916018 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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