The picture illustrates various parts of a heat-based balloon as well as its operating mechanism.
It can be seen that this kind of balloon has several components, of which the envelope makes up the largest part. Additionally, the operation of a hot balloon is based on the ascending circulation of hot air
From the bottom, there is a basket which consists of 2 propane cylinders where propane is mixed with cool air to produce flame to create hot air. The burner above the basket will heat the mixture prepared in the 2 cylinders.
Moving up, there are ropes knotted with a big skirt which are responsible for connecting the basket, the burner, and the envelope. On the envelope, there are panels, gores, and a parachute valve, allowing hot air to escape at a controlled level. Inside this envelope, the hot air quickly rises and makes the air inside the balloon lighter than the cool air surrounding the atmosphere, which flies the balloon.
- The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 78
- The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly Others value quality of work above appearance Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on can come and suggest at least one possible solution 89
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon as well as its operating mechanism. It can be seen that this kind of balloon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the ascending circulation of hot air From the bottom, there is a basket which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85802469136 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6794461161 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2158605727 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986639817538 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454659594055 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320070770669 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655247497408 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278676014939 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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