The pictures below shows the recycling process wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at the given task provides an illustration of how wasted glass bottles are recycled.
Overall, what stands out from the given information is that, there are 3 main phases , starting from taking expired glass bottles to the collection and ending with sending recycled bottles to the supermarket for sale.
Looking into the details,the supplied process is instigated when scrapped glass bottles delivered to the collection point . Then, these bottles are transported in order to make them ready for the next stage in which bottles are pressured. Once,wasted bottles glasses are pressured in water,they are classified into 3 groups which are clear ,green, and brown. Then , glasses are sent to the factory for fragmenting into pieces. Following that the process comes to the next stage in which ,glass pieces are burnt in furnace at 600-800 calcium degree. Having been melt in high temperature ,glasses are separated into two types; recycled and new liquid. Next, both of them are formed in mould then, bottled. At the end of the phase, recycled glass bottles are sent to the stock for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rmation is that, there are 3 main phases , starting from taking expired glass bott...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...et for sale. Looking into the details,the supplied process is instigated when scr...
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Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ottles delivered to the collection point . Then, these bottles are transported in ...
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Line 6, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , wasted
...age in which bottles are pressured. Once,wasted bottles glasses are pressured in water,...
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Line 6, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...d bottles glasses are pressured in water,they are classified into 3 groups which are ...
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Line 6, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...classified into 3 groups which are clear ,green, and brown. Then , glasses are sen...
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Line 6, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which are clear ,green, and brown. Then , glasses are sent to the factory for fra...
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Line 6, column 487, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...process comes to the next stage in which ,glass pieces are burnt in furnace at 600...
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Line 6, column 587, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e. Having been melt in high temperature ,glasses are separated into two types; re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12777777778 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56284735572 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7368693285 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223467334254 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889124783114 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423321612221 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148600619146 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253454102805 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.